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Your review was AMAZINGLY helpful. I don't know much about the badge system at all -- I used to be a Junior Moderator, but grew too busy, and I haven't ...

Navita -- I will comment on these! Tonight, when I get out of work! I promise! :D

April 8th, 2010 "Look in my face; my name is Might-have-been; I am also call'd No-more, Too-late, Farewell..." --Dante Gabriel Rossetti,"Superscription" Better off, can I call myself this now? Who ...

I really enjoy the concept behind the last poem. I find the second stanza much more exciting than the first, to the point where I feel like the first part ...

This year's NaPo poems are not nearly as okay as my poems I wrote for NaPo last year. :( -- 4.7 Location Lullabye You say the city is just no ...

Jiggity, you write my kind of poetry. Short, but with an interesting use of words. This is my favorite: I can't breathe. I need a form something to pour myself ...

April 5th - long time, no see for the first time in years, I went to the grove that's just a rock's throw away, it's odd how I meet up ...

I'M FINALLY CAUGHT UP. Also -- my grandma just passed away, and I wrote this after thinking about how much her wake bothered me. Don't mean to offend... or do ...

I think the concept of the latest poem is very interesting. I find the rhyme scheme and repetition work against it however -- I think maybe you would have able ...

4.5. Jenny* Jenny's laughing languidly, sitting lazy on the dock, she's fond of Samantha and asking now for sympathy, cutting out photos in magazines and carefully taping them up. This ...

I think April 6 picks up at these lines: It lived and lived – and without any meaning. “Hit me with your big mack truck,” I bet it said. “I ...

HANNAH BANANA KATANA (pronounce it so it rhymes!) I really like the title of your latest poems, "Just the Babiest Fragments of Notes" -- Babiest, that just reels me right ...

4.4. Sleeps He laughs, and says I'm bad at sleeping; well, boy I tell him, maybe I just want to lie awake next to you all night and tell you ...

4.3 A little etheree for thee There is nothing more reassuring than the two of us laying in the bed and you turning your face to me just smiling, saying ...

4.2 The Rewind There's a girl from the summer, from four summers ago, who sits on the edge of my thoughts at all times; sometimes my eyes become hers. I ...