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The last line in that last one (last?) is just too good. It makes me happy in it's depressingness.

Notice: I recognize that a trend of longer reviews have been going on. I've been giving indepth reviews because I've been MIA, and I missed doing that -- however, don't ...

HANNAH I LOVE YOUR POETRY IT MAKES ME GO WOOOOO. *arrested by Caps Lock police* HAAAALP.

Yes, I know I shouldn't ask, haha, but I felt a little confused about the topic. It's very abstractly put together, and gives no hint of an actual setting until ...

Everyone here rocks hardcore. And I'm feeling guilty for bad poetry, but I love the critiques to salvage them! You're all heroes. --- April, 11th (This is all one poem) ...

HANNARRR. April 9th, 2010; Well, I just like this one, simple as that. The first line is amazing, and the last line is too, appropriately, and it sandwiches a content ...

NA-VEEEE-TA. You're pretty much my new favorite person. --- You RL -- AGAIN! I now see where you identify him as a teacher: your voice, tender, leading me through the ...

Kylan, you're name -- it's now like mine. :) But you know what's more important? YOUR POEMS. --- to marie, on her most special day: I've been attracted to these ...

I appreciate the comments, and find them helpful! The poem does need trimming, and should be less blunt about some things. However, it should be kept in mind that I ...

I'm very tired, so I apologize if I fail to phrase things appropriately. --- Middle Ground: I enjoy, really, every line here. "Love never lived a line". I find more ...

4.10. Bad Radio Send a signal into the world -- and receive nothing back, it breaks your heart. Realizing one's been cut off, it's enough to make you shut up, ...

Hey sarg! I agree with Hannah about the precious line. And the first two stanza are very strong -- I really like them. I'm not a fan of this one ...

Oh man! I wrote this at work -- it needs a lot of work. But I was trying to style it after the poem "Marriage" by Gregory Corso: Corso's is ...

I'm tired. I hope what I write makes sense. :P I admire the fact that you have the time to write such large poems each day. I try to make ...

I OWE you. This might get lengthy. --- Tiempo: Right at the very beginning, this is a much better poem than I ever wrote at your age -- but this ...