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Wow! This story is absurd. In a good way! It kept me reading, the fact that she overreacts so much over endings. And I thought the beginning was VERY amusing... ...

This is a good start! Instead of "Story of the Unnamed", how about just "The Unnamed" for the title? Sounds more classy. :wink: I, am a homo sapiens are a ...

Hey Pingu! By any chance is your nickname from that old claymation penguin cartoon? I used to love that! Cracked me up. :lol: I'm new here too, but it's been ...

Five inexperienced surgeons did sex-alteration surgery on the flirtatious watermelon. The ______ girl wanted to _______ the _________ boy. (adj/verb/adj)

Rufus Wainwright is a solo singer... that was me just not paying attention while I write. Haha. :P

:shock: Wow, this is very well written! The language is so concise and mature. Way to go! You do use Captain Bear's name a lot, some pronouns are needed. Maybe ...

This story is very interesting. I find myself really liking the main character, and what's going on in her mind. I can't wait to see more. Except I think some ...

You have a nice, steady writing style. Good story, so far. At the beginning though, I think you should indicate right away that it is a shaving razor in question. ...

A very interesting story. I love the loop of it. The storyline is slightly confusing in the paragraphs in the end - or maybe that's just me. [s]now[/s] since we ...

I wrote this two years ago, but I never really edited it and figured I might as well see what people have to say about it. I thought it might ...

Very interesting! I love his sneering attitude, it really draws my attention and makes me want to see where it came from. A story about a place of outcasted fantasy ...

This is my absolute favorite television show! William Shatner and James Spader are perfect together, and there couldn't have been ANYone else for these roles! Plus, I love the way ...

I'm definitely Team Edward, and I think the actors a bit off. Isn't it Cedric Diggory? ... Quite an odd comparison, haha! But Jacob is Sharkboy. Sharkboy and Cedric Diggory... ...

I agree with the already mentioned Vampire Weekend and Rufus Wainwright. Two VERY great bands! My favorite album is Neutral Milk Hotel's "In the Aeroplane Over the Sea". It's disturbing ...

Normalcy is a real word, for the person who said that, haha. It was made up by some American President but it caught on. So feel free to use it. ...