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This story... is FANTASTIC. I love the helpless neuroticism of the MC. It's so entertaining, and the way it's written just makes me keep reading eagerly to find out what ...

Most of the nitpicking's aside. I really liked this story. It's very sweet, and I like stories about friendship. Heart-warming! :D I don't think I've ever read a story with ...

I agree with JFW. Everything's cliched. Everything's been done before, unless you're going to run ludicrously rampant into the absurd like some others (Palahniuk, I'm thinking) but even THEY'RE helple

This is just a little short story I've been tinkering with. I haven't finished it yet, but I've got more written than this. Inspired by an ex (current?) friend's neighbor ...

Her name is Dailey? I bow to you. For sheer awesome genius. I am so amused. The slang way this is written is great. I want to see where it ...

I like-a the love triangle. I'm loving Mark and his promiscuity. I want to see more of what's up with this guy. :D I'm surprised Jeff doesn't rank in the ...

Woo! Thanks everyone. I wanted it to be a hazy sort of story, but apparently I tried too hard. :oops: For clarification, it's about abortion. I guess I need to ...

Amazing opening sentence. :shock: I love it! As of late the thoughts that seemed to be taking [s]about[/s] the most space in her brain were those of her parents Her ...

Oh, you can write fiction honey! It was just as beautiful as I had remembered. I had not been back in over fifteen years but it seemed as if nothing ...

Will you post it?! This sounds great. If I read the summary for the story on the back of the the book at Border's, I would definitely throw it in ...

I really didn't like the book at all. I just didn't like Viv, or whatever her name was. But the same author wrote The Silver Kiss?! I had no idea! ...

It does sound like a good book. Especially since I did enjoy Speak. But it's kind of weird that the plot is almost exactly the same, if just for the ...

A few spelling errors. A wail sounded in the usualy quiet nieghborhood Usualy = usually With in the dark house some one flicked on a lamb. It should be within ...

This is very short, and it's not meant to be longer. I was just listening to "Lime Tree" by Bright Eyes and the idea came into my head. Tear it ...

Ditto with the dialogue, but everyone's said that. So easy to fix though. The storyline is interesting, but walks a thin line between being unoriginal. But I'm sure it's just ...