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This is such an interesting piece! One of my personal favorite storylines is that of the dystopic world. I don't know why, I just think it's a fascinating concept. One ...

Welcome to YWS! You have an amazing username. :smt038 Also, I need to point out: according to site rules, you need to review two pieces of work to everyone one ...

*high-five!!* I'm going to be certified for grades 5 - 12. I'd like to teach in grades 9 or 10... so they're still a wee bit younger but I can ...

I just went and read all three parts of this in a row. This is beautiful, beautiful, beautiful . You write FAR beyond your years and you are going to ...

10/10... I think it's just adorable. :)

Whoa! Jiro does remind me of Cloud. High-five for everyone, FF7 is my one true love. :D Anyway... I don't recommend posting character summaries. I think your characters should be ...

Yay, here we go! *hugs* Three major things: 1. RULES: According to the rules of this site, you need to review at least two pieces before you post your own ...

Welcome to YWS!! *confetti, hugs* I had this whole nice rewiew on this, and then my computer went kablooey and I lost it all. So here's the shortened version, minus ...

A blue bird flew by them in the sky as they were tanning under the special made lights in the backyard of the Harpers Estate. Special made lights = special-made ...

9/10 I like it... it's funny!!

I try to convert everyone subtly. "Here's this band... and his one... oh, and I'll give you this CD too, this is my favorite." A lot of people are turned ...

Seriously, Professor Rabbit! They mention "Seven Words" again and again, but I thought that was mildly okay compared to the rest of his genius. How about commend his entire comedy ...

I'm just curious if there's any other Neutral Milk Hotel fans. Or haters. I have both of their albums and adore them. And "In the Aeroplane Over the Sea" is ...

This is in the wrong place. Go to Writing --> Submit something --> Science fiction, or some category --> Copy and paste your story. Put spaces between the paragraphs. --> ...

Stephen King? Vomit-worthy? I think his short stories are so clever. He may be a "junk writer", but he knows how to entertain. I adore him! On the other hand ...