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Banned for being an invalid reason. :P

I was wondering if anyone else has read this. It's been a while since I read it (read it twice) and I haven't talked about it for a while. But ...

I have such a hard time suggesting any edits on your work. Everything seems so flawless the way it is, I'm so content simply reading it that I feel like ...

I can't resist those puppy eyes. :D The half moon hung in the sky like some great celestial yin-yang Personal taste: I don't really the "some" here. It seems too ...

oh this is awesome! "Rod Remington"... haha :lol: I've read a lot of romance novels and never encountered THAT. I have a big fat book of baby names I reference ...

5/10 It's kind of boring. :?

He was a truly annoying, messed-up little prick back then, a real Negative Nancy. Now, as we both enter our high school senior year, he’s become one intolerable little fuck. ...

Hoorah, more Albert! *dance* I'm curious as to how the faeries know he's been alone in his mind for seven years. Have they been watching him? I love the conversation ...

[s]Everyone is big[/s]. Everyone is tall, all those humans. My suggestion. I love the innocent tone of this. Overall, it's a very nice story. It's a little confusing in some ...

I really like the beginning. "A great day to do this..." What a bizarrely optimisic thought to think about the situation. Makes me love it even more. :) I also ...

7/10 I like the colors. But I live in NY and I do not love it. :(

If we wanna go down this road... in Sharkboy and Lavagirl, Jacob's actor was a shark... and in Twilight... he's a wolf. :lol:

9/10 I was born in the Year of the Snake. :D Means I'm STUBBORN!

Welcome to YWS! :smt039 I'm guessing you're unaware of this but there's this: ONE RULE TO RULE THEM ALL : BEFORE you post a piece of your own, you need ...

I'm kind of bombarded with projects now, and I feel like I rushed the ending of this. :roll: I really need to be hit over the head and pointed in ...