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Yay, first up! Anyone else? I'm bored and ready to review to your heart's content! :D

7/10 How violent! Yet amusing.

7/10 I like that song!

Banned for caring so much about people but still ruthlessly banning them.

Wow! This is long. But Im gonna tackle this the best I can! *rolls up sleeves* A long time ago on a small isolated bay in the heart of a ...

Haha, early stories are wonderful to re-read. And humbling. I started writing when I was like - uh... forever. I don't even remember. I can't recall what my first story ...

Okay, I have to admit that I don't know much about poetry structure - but I love reading poetry. And free verse always attracts me much more than any sonnet ...

The little boy was wearing a white sleepsuit and a pair of mittens, so he didn't scratch himself Babies scratch themselves?! He could just be wearing mittens for the cold. ...

Ah, people obscured in blurry darkness! 6/10 My kitty is coming to get you xD

Ding-ding-ding! That's my name. And I just looked at your gender status. *head/wall* Der! Boy, do I feel like an idiot. Here I am guessing girl's names. I'm sorry for ...

Hey-o Tamora! The second paragraph is a big change from the first. I think you should a transition between the two, instead of jumping right into that topic. Even something ...

Hey, Israeli_Camel! Welcome to YWS! *throws cookies at you* First thing, ONE RULE : It is mandatory at YWS to post two reviews before you post your own work. Which ...

A warm summer’s day, a harsh winter night; these things, like all other things we can see, [s]touch[/s], make up the world. Along with these things come all things in ...

Thank you, guys. *high-fives for other Modest Mouse fans* And you startled me at first, blacktiger :lol:

7/10 Pretty butterfly. Reminds me of Thumbelina.