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Banned for living in a locker.

7/10 I like the second one, but the first - the Bee Movie was strange. o_O

9/10 Very pretty, inspires jealousy ^_^

Anyone else? These are free reviews! All you have to do is ask. ^_^

Hey Tosh! Welcome to YWS! *knows Spanish* Maybe you should have a key somewhere for those who don't. Describe Alej a little more. I'm a little unsure why he should ...

*shameful revival of story* Wow, thank you guys! I wasn't sure people would actually like this... and if someone could teach me how to format, that would be very nice, ...

In fact, some of its residents found that it had terrible weather I think you should rephrase the last part, since it sounds a little lame with the prior sentence. ...

Her head swung as she talked. The way puppets do when you twist the back bar, I think that sentence should be apart of the following paragraph. The way puppets ...

Hey bunnie you are! :D The first thing I saw was the newspaper. It read of a man who died while trying to save his kid from drowning, my kid. ...

Prose. Needs a lot of work. How the heck do you format? Some of the formatting is screwed up. *eyes cross in frustration* The poem part doesn't actually look like ...

Hey Churlish! to a city with such a insane ruler Since "insane" starts with a vowel, "a" should be "an". The first paragraph is written very well and draws me ...

It rang again, longer this time, someone was impatient That last bit is sort of just hanging there. I think a dash would suit this nicely. "...this time - someone ...

to join in the sillyness Silliness. on their chest, were ready to take my Angel. No comma there. 0.2 Love at First Hell I don't really like/get this title. "Hell ...

Banned for giving terrible medical advice (your custom title).