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Okay, I reviewed the both of you guys. ^_^ Still open for requests.

Hey Jamie! Intro: The story starts in a strange place. You drop us down into the middle of a a big event and it's kind of awkward at first. Ooh, ...

Hey Mkuzek! First off, try to think of a more attention grabbing title. The title you have currently could be left as a note at the start of the post. ...

You are a very talented artist for your age. Heaven knows I can't paint like that. :shock: Painting's my bane. These seem like they're nice, but the picture quality is ...

Ok, here I am! First, I must say that I hope you revised your first chapter with all those wonderful suggestions everyone gave you. I read it, and since you ...

I saw this yesterday and loved it to pieces. The storyline was just phenomenal - better than the rest of these godawful CG films coming out lately. Or most films ...

This is loooong. For those less adventurous, post smaller pieces. Dissect this puppy up! But I am going to tackle it, just watch me! :D Intro : It's very common ...

Heya, writin! Love your username. ^_~ It's over. It's so over. Your smell of cheap cologne is nauseating. Your once lovable touch makes my skin crawl. I can't believe I ...

I am going to finish this. So have faith in me, and throw a shoe at me if you don't see me submit anything else of this for a bit ...

Banned for being all those things your avatar says you are.

Ok, your done, BBB! Still open for business. :D

Wow, what a treat this was to read! What a wonderful, new take on a story this is. I don't read much - pretty much no - second person. So ...

Ok, Curly, I'm gonna help you out with this like you asked! *cracks knuckles* ^_^ Kate slammed the door shut of her apartment and used the spare key to lock ...

Hello? *echo... echo.... echo* :P

Oh, they're not really supposed to be conveying emotions... I meant for them to just sort of look like they really do, not cartoony. Of course, now I see that ...