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I must bombard you! D: When you have time. ^_^

Oops! Sorry Wiseman, I'll get to that once I have time. Still open for business too, by the way. =D

Banned for NOT thinking it's time to dance.

Banned for not having a signature.

Snow.

Hey Jiggity! She could see roots, bugs, birds and things. It all reads so prettily, and then things comes up. Things always looks bad in writing - perhaps find a ...

when your first name is so interesting, I don't know if it matters if your last name is boring :lol:

Hola! Rhea was nearly begging, something she had grown into disliking more than anything in the world. This line was rather confusing. Something Rhea dislikes? Or Hannah? I had to ...

:smt100 (one/how to be overly critical of yourself before your day has even started) With as much grace as possible, Suzan Mackintosh stripped out of her polka dot pajama bottoms, ...

I actually like the hair. And the eyes look awesome. This is really amazing for MS paint, because that is an extremely difficult program to draw with. The left eyes ...

I think it would be difficult to write in diary format, because you have to make it read like a diary and yet still make it fiction-worthy, and interesting. If ...

Banned for wanting to stab me in the eye.

That seems like a waste of a week, personally. And a little bit on the odd side. I would suggest just writing out random conversations between characters on a blank ...

Hey Gryphon! He was perfect in every way, except for one thing... He was already dead... Ellipses never look very nice in writing. This is a kick-butt intro, but if ...

Welcome to YWS! Remember to review. Like Sam described. *points to prior post* I was scared to even touch you, scared I'd break you! I'm not really a big fan ...