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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Brothers of Arms

    I liked the poem. It was solemn but not so much that I was left wanting to go sit in a dark corner and loathe the world. I think my ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Of The Fallen Spirit

    Overall I really liked the poem. It was a bit different to read in the beginning but I soon became accustomed to it. I loved the fast-paced motion you kept ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Monster That Is Mine

    Very well written! I loved the title. It was simple and catchy and easily drew in the reader. The wording was nice. Although the commas and phrasing made it a ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Siren's Call

    Ah, I completely agree with you all on the wording choice. I didn't even realize that! This was unedited and written on the spur of the moment. I was trying ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Siren's Call

    They say the freaks come out at midnight. Why is that? What's so special about midnight? Is the air more conductive to supernatural experiences? Does the moonlight provide a less ...

    Jan 25, 2011


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