ClinicalCynic

First off, let me say thank you for the wonderful reviews that you have left on my stories. They are much appreciated. I absolutely love this story. It's wonderfully written. ...

Okay, first off I would like to say that I like it. I'm just going to add a few suggestions. I laugh. I smile. I giggle. I would consider selecting ...

For all of those that are wanting more? GOOD. I like writing with the feel of the Romantics: a feeling of yearning and longing. My goal is to transmit that ...

Let's burn back the stars And drift into the night sky All regret aside A nexus of hope A refuge, a haven in each other's breath Tendrils of nostalgia Waves ...

Fingers type the words you see, Eyes unseen read words on screen, These first two lines were gorgeous in a minimalistic sense. A message, a note, the reverberation Of a ...

Thanks for all the advice, bud. I agree with most of your comments. It needs a lot of polishing. It's not the final draft. I just prefer to get several ...

This is going to be a long one. Just a warning, continue at your own risk. Without his sister’s immediate presence, the weight of the conversation began to fully set ...

Ignition—a madhouse of scarlet and sulfur, I loved the imagery within this line snarled together in dissonant chords, blasting against the framework of what could not be, what should not ...

Haha! I will, I will. I'm actually in the process of writing Part 3 as we speak. I'm not sure when I'll be able to get it finished. I'm going ...

I absolutely loved this. I'm a huge fan of Ancient Mythology and this was wonderfully written. I would have loved to see the Gods developed a bit more. Are they ...

I simply loved your use of imagery in this piece. It was nothing short of gorgeous. There were some punctuation erros as was stated by someone else, but overall I ...

Ah yes. I completely agree on your suggestions. It never fails. No matter how many times I read over something, there are a few things that slip right by without ...

The spotlight illuminated the stage as the large, red velvet curtains were drawn to reveal an expansive orchestra. It was truly a sight to behold. The violinist's bows, poised and ...

I loved the story! It was interesting to read. I liked your use of higher vocabulary words instead of opting for the less-educated approach. It added a flair of wisdom ...

I adored this. The emotion is conveyed in a concise manner. It's very applicable to people. Everyone has felt "lost" at some point in their life so everyone can relate ...