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2/10 A bit crowded. It seems that you were jumping up and down screaming "pick me! Pick me!" to the reader who is considering buying you. --- The Vampires stole ...

7/10 A very interesting twist on the save the world sub genre. Though, it does seem to lack much character motivation/a way of getting across a sympathetic protagonist. All she ...

3/10 This isn't a bad opening line, just a pet peeve of mine. You see, you're being obscure about this "she" when there is no need to be. What was ...

5/10 Perhaps I need some context for this one, but I didn't really like it. There wasn't anything wrong with it, other than the fact that it seems like a ...

Hm, five? I don't know if I can do it. 5. All the Dune books after the first. Don't get me wrong, I love me some Dune. But after the ...

8/10 Very well put together, nicely flowing. It just seems right . The problem I have is the draw for me to read the book isn't as strong as the ...

7/10 Though it has room for improvement, it is a strong start. Just a little nipick: why do we need to know it was half past eight? Why not just ...