Clay

Daniel Farrell Scotland Walking down a rocky countryside road I listened as the sounds of cars zooming back and forth with humans living a short and near meaningless lives, I ...

Name: Human form - Daniel Farrell, fire demon - Ira, Earth demon - Sloth Age: physical age - 37, real age 802 Race: Demon Appearance: In human form - Daniel ...

I dont have a proper name for this yet but I just came up with cause I feeling really down lately so if anyone wants they say any suggestions, apart ...

HIO TOE!!! Great poem I'll try to review (I'm useless when I do it but hey ho!) I really like Memories remembered, ambitions dreamt, Schemes planned, and proposals given, Problems ...

I'm really glad I stumbled on to this poem, although its depressing and sad, its brillant and amazing at the same time. I, like most who's posted and reviewed cant ...

Wow, at first it took me a second to get used to your writing style, (I'm not long new, so I not that good at reviewing) but the story was ...

Name: James Harking Gender: Male Age: 32 Job: Unemployed Appearance: He had short and spiked up light brown hair, he is a fair build and wears a pinstriped suit and ...

Another review, the fight scene wasnt long but I think it was long enough, and I also seen that you didnt change the “Graham Jackson get you scummy ass here ...

Yay! you posted it! You already know my review, its an a great start and makes me want to read more, even tho you dont like writing in first person ...

Amazing, thats the word that popped into my after I read this. Just by the way you told the story was great and the plot was good. I'm glad I ...

Its was really interesting to read, my only problem was at some parts I got a bit lost at to what was happening but thats probly me just being tried ...

Well for someone whos half asleep, you wrote amazing poem, it was deepessing but there was a lot emotion in. I'm not that good at reviewing and this my first ...

I deleted this one and soon will add the one I recently worked on after I forgot about it :)