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Re: Set plot or meandering?
Do you find it better to start writing a story with a set plot? Is it easier to just meander until you find a good place to end? I've never ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Summer Barbeque *no edit*
You must be starving; Do you want a hamburger? No, thanks. Do you want a hot dog? No, I'm fine. Potato salad or maybe even some vegetables with Ranch? I ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: snow falling on cedars
My, my this is lovely. I almost forgot to stop reading. :D I don't understand the verb to lip in line 2. Perhaps a different one-syllable verb? The first line ...
Feb 7, 2010 -
Re: Sunset
This poem is a bit too commonplace for me. There's nothing really wholly unique about it. The rhyme scheme also takes away from the meaning (which also seems to be ...
Feb 7, 2010