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Re: Camp Supernatural [Closed]
Dear Campers, If you’re reading this, I’m really sorry. It means you’ve found out you are Supernatural, and now you’re in for a world of trouble. I’d like to tell ...
Jul 17, 2010 - Re: Midnight ( started, accepting) Jul 15, 2010
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Re: Midnight ( started, accepting)
Jasper Wildes: Sweeping my hand across a heavy foot print; a small, carnivorous smile fled across my features. I stared down at the dead bodies the Guardians had left behind. ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Have Story; Need Partner!
I thought I'd give this a go... All over the news it is known that the circus has come to town. From amazing ariel stuntman to fire acrobats, this is ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Luna 7
Hello, my name is Cirque and I'll be your reviewer for today. On an overall, this was very interesting and cleverly thought out. “Where did you get this?” h is ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Linger On Your Pale Blue Eyes
Welcome to YWS! As I haven't seen you are much, I'm taking it that you're new or I just don't look for people. My name is Cirque and I'll be ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Cloud and Keke-Renegade children-proposal-part 1
Hello, my name is Cirque but my Mum named me Alice; so you can choose what name to call me. I feel kind of special as the main characters name ...
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Re: A Proper Introduction- Zuko & Momo
Hello, my name is Cirque and I'll be your reviewer for today. What I found as I read through your story is that your explanation was phenomenal. You didn't bog ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Open Roads *Casey Johnson*
I don't really know if I can review this, though I'll place my opinion on your character to make it strong and stuff. I've seen these kind of things in ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Lightning Platoon 106 ch. 1 pt2
I read your title wrong to think that this was your 106th chapter. I was all like; WHAT!!! But now I see, it's platoon 106. :lol: Anyway, I'm going to ...
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Re: After the Shadow Children Part 2
Hello, my name is Cirque and I'm going to be your reviewer for today. I'm going into a different kind of reviewing really just try out this style. It's not ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Wolf Creek: The Quest Chapter One
This may by a rather short review as you haven't written much and grammar and spelling are good that there weren't to many mistakes to pick up on but a ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Midnight ( started, accepting)
-Name: Jasper Wildes -Age: Seventeen years of age. -Allegiance: Evil -Species (if evil): Vampire -Appearance/attire: Jasper always wears black, with a dark red scarf. His thick trench coat is always ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: The Red Herrin'-Chapter 1
Hello, I'm Cirque or Alice (anyone is fine) and I'm here to review your work today. I just want to point out that both the title and appearance are appropriate ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Blue Eyes Don't Lie (4)
The title to this is very interesting. It's the particular reason I chose to review this. What I don't like about it upon appearance though is its clutterdiness (is that ...
Jul 11, 2010
