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Re: Warning to Amateurs: Professional Poetry
I applaud your reference to Apollinaire. Only one part I thought needs help: "Mature poets have little yen to read" - I was under the impression that yen is a ...
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Re: Indeed, it is a new day
Howdy. Nice to meet you all.
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Re: To Rend This Tattered Heart (formally "Shatter")
I'm glad you liked the poem. Any title suggestions, or do you like that too? It's interesting that we both lost our ability to write, isn't it? Perhaps we are ...
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Re: To Rend This Tattered Heart (formally "Shatter")
"To Rend This Tattered Heart" Your hand casually touches my breast, cupping it in your palm Willingly I allow you to reach inside me, your fingers probing first my ribcage ...
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Re: The Wheel of Time (Robert Jordan)
The books are great until about the fifth one... then it becomes repetitive and mundane. But such is life. Mat and Perrin are the best characters.
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Re: Indiscretion
"Indiscretion" I’ve come to accept the way the sparkle of the ring on my finger catches your eye. The way it turns about as your kiss hovers just above my ...
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Re: Poem
It's a poem, just in a different format. Since does poetry have rules? Screw the rules, kids, they were meant to be broken anyway. But that doesn't excuse this poem ...
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Re: Unfinished
Lead me into a curtained off, hidden corner You don't need that comma. Unnecessary pause. To make the next phrase parallel, it would help to add a "You" at the ...
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Re: Indeed, it is a new day
Hey all. Galatea is a good friend of mine and she got me to join this forum. I'm a veteran of several other forums, most notably Hatrack. The name is ...
Oct 4, 2005
