Cicero

In a world where these word Add an 's' to word. Are just sounds Like a desperate plea From a woman Who had just lost her dignity. These words are ...

for years I've been crying into a pillow full of goosedown the mantra of ghostkisses and spiderflys gnashing at my head my only thoughts are missing you Woo! This stanza ...

First of all, I agree with Snoink - the title does suck. The canvas tent is iced with October. Winds from Canada find their way under flaps, into the skin ...

Love IS painful... when you love someone so much that your throat seizes up and your chest constricts... but love is wonderful, despite the pain that may follow. It is ...

"The View From My Window is of the Roof" 10/19/05 The view from my window is of the roof each tile uniform and gray. Sure, there is a window down ...

I'm writing a story for our university newspaper about the pressures to publish that professors feel... it's almost a disease...

Thank you, Brad, for a good and honest critique. I really appreciate it. My best guess is that this is a poem about an illicit liaison, that that's why one ...

You are truly laughable. You can be overly critical to the point of hurtful, and downright mean when people only want honest and constructive critiques. When asked to demonstrate your ...

Brad - since you clearly know everything about poetry, I'd appreciate it if you would comment on one or both of my poems (lyric poetry - "Indiscretion" and/or "To Rend ...

Sorry - double post

Psy - first of all, you're right, I did point out just about everything I didn't like. But I also pointed out the things I did like, as well as ...

Imitation is the highest form of flattery and it is how we learn to develop our own styles. It would be a lie for any of us to claim that ...

Okay, look - I don't know that you want this critiqued. It seems a lot of people on this forum just like parading their "skill," so don't rip me a ...

Crysi - Writing written at that pace is bound to be pretty craptastic. I doubt anyone would steal it. I did it a few years ago. Good times. I think ...

How's that title working? Any better? Thanks for your help.