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Let me say this: I know this thread will soon be deleted. Rest in peace, freedom of expression and speech. I am not ungrateful for responses. I find it completely ...

If you are just going to tell me you don't like it and then not offer any suggestions, please don't crit my work at all. I'm here for constructive criticism, ...

C'mon guys, how about a little love?

You could make the three unrevealed letters into a neat sequence of poems, you know. Here are my suggestions: Then steal the unobliging host's fair child. How about a question ...

This poem has been knocking around in my head for a while, but I am having trouble on several accounts: 1. I need to work in the main context of ...

“Golden Bubbles” By K.J. Hascall 11/17/06 You look so different through the bottom of this empty glass, your head framed by the slick residue of beer and one golden bubble ...

First of all, Gum, this is a phenomenal poem. I am very impressed. I have some nit-picky things. Inksplats is the price to talk - but we barter nonetheless, for ...

Bob - Je parle français pour dix ans, donc, je comprendre. Mais votre phrase en français a tort. Peut-être, direz: ce n'est pas Paris, mais ma dame d'amour. Basically, your ...

So I'm going to pull an Incandence and tell it like it is. This poem does little for me, and it sounds just like a conversation you had with your ...

You're welcome. Free verse isn't something to be afraid of. It's liberating. Hence, FREE verse. I suggest, before you launch yourself headlong into a new form of poetry, reading some ...

Well, this a few months behind the rest of the praise, but I thought I'd share a few thoughts: 'Meet me under the clock tower at one' she said, and ...

Wow. I feel old. I was born in the '80s when crimped hair and leg warmers were popular. I had a pair when I was in early elementary school. What ...

COaIF- First, of all, this is a great start for someone who claims poetry is not their thing. Secondly, it needs some work. The first thing I noticed is that ...

P.S. "A Separate Peace" is an AWESOME book. I've never met anyone besides myself who liked it, so you're a welcome suprise!

I like this poem a lot, Chevy! I think you have some clarifying to do, but it moves nicely away from angsty teen love poetry. I opened the car door ...