Chryssa2305

Thanks guys for the review :) I'll admit that I'm obviously not good with commas. I was never taught them properly. I should look into that... I will definetly go ...

A/N: Okay, so this is the first thing I've been able to write in a long while. I've kinda been going through some stuff and I thought I should write ...

(WHere did everyone else GO? ) Ria: "No problem, Miranda." Zayme smiles as he stares out over the ocean. I piped up, "Maybe for food we could just use what ...

(My mom does the EXACT SAME THING XDDD) (Surprises? o.o) Ria: As we finally cane to a halt in the loose circle with the others Zayne pipes up, "Found him!" ...

(lol, nah, nothing like that. Just grades. ) Zayne: "You talk because you are nervous," I smile at him. "And I've only met you, Ria here, and two others. From ...

Ria: I laugh at the guy, "Mhm, real thug." I shrug my bag closer to my shoulder and briskly walk to catch up to him. "By the way, I never ...

Ria: "Let's only hope we dont find one," I said, laughing at the image. Sure, it was horrible, but it was entertaining. "Come on, weirdos." Zayne smiled and started walking. ...

Zayne: He took the first aid kit in a long fingered hand. "I'm fine mostly. Just a bump here and a bruise there." I said with a shrug. "This is ...

(My second character) 2: Name: Ariana Summers. "Ria" "Ari" (from her brother) "Girle." Age: 16 Gender: Female. Hair Color, Style, and Length: Pale blonde(basically white) with blue tips and faded ...

Zayne: I nod at the girls theory. Sure, that could have happened. Or he could have just been screaming his head off too much to do anything. But I'm not ...

(Hi everyone :3 I am joining. Thanks Cspr! :D By the way, this is my first time doing these, so I'll have to figure it out. Please excuse any future ...

Challenge Two ~Chryssa

This is what I have so far. o.o I didn't realize it was so long. Apologies. 1.Write more. Write something everyday. Be it a paragraph long journal entry or fifteen ...

Hi there! First off, I'd like to welcome you to YWS. I'm sure you'll have a tremendous time here. Just a few nitpicks here, This is just a suggestion, when ...

Hi there! First off, I'd like to welcome you to YWS. I'm sure you'll have a tremendous time here. Just a few nitpicks here, This is just a suggestion, when ...