Chomperlover

First of all I really liked it. I love the whole concept of your poem and how you worked it in. I think you slipped up a few places in ...

Sometimes I wish life Would slow down To a snail's pace. Stop. Go back. To relive moments Of pure happiness, Joy, Belonging. Moments of feeling I actually fit Into the ...

Wow I really like your poem, especially the ending. The rhyming is off in a few in a few places but it's not very bad. I really like how you ...

Well overall I really like your poem. At the begininng the rhyming starts off very well and it flows very nicely. The rhymes fit in well with the way you ...

Overall I thought the poem flowed very well. I really like how you worded it in the end. I would just like to say that at the very beginning it ...

I'm not moving forward I'm not moving back I'm stuck right here Emotions I do lack This world is empty There's nothing here No reason to be afraid No reason ...