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ChocolateMoonLight

  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You

    hey! You really summed up the thing that is LOVE. You just captured the true essence of it. Its passionate, beautiful, deep and plain fabulous. I love your style of ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Forget Him

    hey! this is a really good story and any crush-struck teenager can identify with it. I really like your style of writing, it's fun and FRANK AND INTERESTING. I just ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Losing it all

    I really got interested in the PIECE OF WORK(I'm calling it that because I just read a plot a writer studies before constructing an actual story) from the start but ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: I hate to say this but... Vampires

    I really like your lonely and evil was quite refreshing to read the story of bad guy who feels sorry for his old dog. I liked way you started your ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: hhhhhhh

    i like the way you started the story with the introduction of the character in his own words, but then i read ahead and i get a little confused because ...

    Apr 1, 2011


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