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Hey Oliver! Moon here to review as you requested... First things first, I really liked your poem. It had a nice feeling to it. I loved your description, it was ...

Happy birthday, I am quite right twenty having been cursed for this latter decade to share a date with terrorism, but no matter how long I sit and stare and ...

Hey! Really great. This was so hilarious... I've read the original book and I too had a 'Twilight Crazy' phase and after obsessing over the original one, when I read ...

Hey! Rahul sorry to review this late, but I'm here now... l'm really disappointed by this chapter. When I read the edited version of the first chapter I expected this ...

Hey! Rahul Your plot is good, but it’s the first sentence as Rock n' Roll Queen said that grips the reader and yours didn’t really fulfill its purpose. You really ...

Hey! Joe Glad I'm the first one to review and sorry couldn't review the last two chapters, but I'm here now... So this is how it all ends! It was ...

Hey! Joe, So first things first, I absolutely loved this. I just read all the four chapters straight from the beginning without a stop 'cause I couldn't stop! Dude it ...

Hey! Lakshmi, As the story goes, the plot and message behind it was brilliant. I liked the way you narrated the whole (although short) life of a girl whose actions ...

Hey! Justtrying, Moon here to review. First things first- the poem is really great, it has a nice feeling to it. Your starting is also good, I like the way ...

Hey! Flemzo, Great work. It is my first time in critiquing a script but no worries, I've read many and acted in some of them too. I could actually picture ...

Hey! That was really beautiful Price, and it was so sad. I hope you're okay... I can totally understand why you wrote this and don't worry it really doesn't suck, ...

Hey! I just want to say that I really like the this story an the way it's going. It's really good but just one advice from me- take care of ...

Hey! Price... So your story has a lot of potential going on, great background by-the-way. I follow Islam and I know exactly what your M.C. going through, we don't have ...

Hey! AJ I'm rooh and I'm going to be your reviewer today... I like the way you started this story, it's intense, frank and to the point. The way you ...

Hey! Hailstone, I'm rooh and I'll be your reviewer today. First things first, it's a great story, one of the best I've read in a long time. The twist and ...