Chloe

Other - not really sure what it fits under. It's just a narrative I suppose. It's basically the content of a poem but without the structure.

Hey Mars :) Thanks for reviewing my poem. I'd almost given up on anyone doing so! I get what you said about the full stops, I think I was trying ...

ul. I stand up, and suddenly a pulsating energy shoots through my fingers. I jump back, still holding on, but startled. I stare at it in amazement for a minute, ...

Back To Bed Concept of time has evaporated whilst waiting for The Answer. Has she been caught up? Was this one time too many? It's a life of thrills, ecstasy, ...

Wow. I reeeeally like this. It sounds almost like a letter to her lover, but within a diary perhaps as it's very personal. I like how you can just impartially ...

Hi, I think that most of the others on here have touched on this, but I don't think that you should be so blunt that you're writing about your rape. ...

Hi, good poem. I like the content, and I don't see anything wrong in what you have written. However, I think you need to work on the individual lines because ...

Heya, just want to say that it's a very good effective poem. You have set the scene and atmosphere well and I think it all flows. What I just want ...

James Patterson is wonderful but petrifies me. He's such a clever writer but sometimes I wish he wasn't quite so good. I'd lay in bed after reading Kiss The Girls ...

Jodi Picoult is amazing; she inspires me. I love the way she makes you believe one thing, or suspect a certain character, then throws it back in your face. I've ...

Hi Carly :) My music taste is extremely mixed, over the last few years with the whole 'growing up' scenario, I went through an awful lot of phases, and now ...

Hi, I'm Chloe, as the username suggests :) basically I quite like doing anything creative, I'm into art as well as writing. I'm generally quite a lazy writer (i.e I ...