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Re: You know you're a writer when...
Hopefully this hasn't been done yet! You know you're a writer when you teach your three year old sister to read and write. You may also be tutoring them in ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!
How about my poem? Thanks!
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Where are her mittens?
Here is a VERY quirky poem I decided to write for this contest: Expect the weirdness. --M-m-m-meow? said the tiny kitten. Where had her mittens gone? --Meow! said the mother ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: A Game
Three years have passed Though it feels like three days Maybe rephrase the second line? And shriveling my lungs I don't see why you need the 'and' there. Those are ...
Feb 13, 2009 -
Re: Moony,Padfoot,Wormtail,and Prongs:The Important stuff
I love Harry Potter! Okay . . . Yeah, put a space between the sentences and the periods. But I don't think it's that confusing when you change to first ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Need a review? Well, I love doing them!
To the death! My novel, Prologue: Chapter 1: Part 1: Part 2: Thanks!
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
To the death! My novel, Prologue: Chapter 1: Part 1: Part 2: Thanks!
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: A Becki Review
YAY! I'm the first one! Okay, this is a fantasy-romance, called 'To the Death'. Here are the first three parts: Prologue: Chapter 1: Part 1: Part 2: Thanks!
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Wolf's critiques
Can you please review my fantasy?
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: To the death: Chapter One-Part Two
Here it is! Sorry about the longness of it I doubt Alison even likes Sam. She’s just doing it to torture Avril. To make her feel jealous. That’s the reason ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: To the death: Prologue
ld Well, Snoink liked it. But as she said, you can kind of guess the plot line. . Nope, the thing is that what she guessed isn''t right. 8) It's ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: To the death: Chapter 1-Part 1
Sorry, the thing is that I tried to change it to third person right before I reposted it so some of it might be confusing, The reason that all of ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: To the death: Prologue
Thanks for the review, though you're waaaaaaaaaaay off on what happens next. The daughter is evil, it turns out later, and the main character, another girl, is tainted by her ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: To the death: Prologue
I decided to add this to the beginning of my story. I edited from the reviews I had gotten do far, Here it is: “Come over here, dear daughter,” said ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: To the death: Chapter 1-Part 1
Ok, it is finally edited! So please review. *kneals to the floor and begs*
Jan 29, 2009
