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ChiravianSkies

  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    Sounds a bit like a failed garden. Maybe it'd be a bit of an Aesop. I probably wouldn't give it a second glance, but if I picked it up, I'd ...

    Apr 5, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    Sounds dystopian. I'm a bit of a sucker for them, so I'd definitely pick it up and read the blurb. --- Vulpin Mani

    Mar 31, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever

    "Fleck paused a second as a hoarse voice called through the wood in which he was playing in." This was pre-first-draft Stoneslide.

    Mar 28, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Plenty of Fish... ah, You Know The Rest.

    The net's full, but you picked a minnow. Try fishing more. His eyes were blue enough to swim in. (I dread this cliche.)

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    Sounds a bit like a Fantasy Novelist's exam question. Lemme find it.. "26. Did you draw a map for your novel which includes places named things like "The Blasted Lands" ...

    Mar 15, 2015
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Top 5 Worst Books You Ever Read

    Alright then... I'm surprised a full-out book war hasn't broken out. 5. Guardians of Ga'Hoole. I like the plot of this series, but I can't get past the endless exposition, ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Art & Photography Re: Post your art here!

    I usually post all my art on a website called Scratch. So, yeah. Here's an OC that I've had since 2013. She evolves with my art. (You'll see on my ...

    Feb 22, 2015


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