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Re: how to illustrate the setting of a story well
Really, all I do is draw a sketch of what's going on. Then, I'd try and put myself in the head of my character and only point out things my ...
Apr 15, 2015 -
Re: Worst movie you have ever seen
I'd really like to add the Snow Queen on this. It's the 2012 version I saw on Netflix, and... It sucked. The graphics were good. They obviously had some kind ...
Apr 11, 2015 -
Re: Worst movie you have ever seen
Divergent. The books were okay, but the movie... ugh. And I could never pull myself through Deathly Hallows Part 1.
Apr 10, 2015 -
Re: Knights of the Green Room Great Hall
@Iggy I stagger in and see Pretzel in front of me. In an awkward salute, I raise my log. "I think I need a helmet too. For 25 reviews." (Sorry, ...
Apr 10, 2015 -
Re: Title Feedback
*Mythology mode switches on* Ooh, give me ze Roman Gods. Right quick, please! So, I'd most definitely pick it up, and mentally translate all the Roman names to Greek names. ...
Apr 6, 2015 -
Re: Title Feedback
Sounds a bit like a failed garden. Maybe it'd be a bit of an Aesop. I probably wouldn't give it a second glance, but if I picked it up, I'd ...
Apr 5, 2015 -
Re: The Chirave's Log.
I have no idea how to format these links, sorry bout that. :? 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. 11. 12. 13. 14. 15. 16. 17. ...
Apr 4, 2015 -
Re: Squires' Dormitory
A-Okay. I'll complete my log. :D
Apr 4, 2015 -
Re: Squires' Dormitory
Yeah. That was sorta my question. I kind of have 23 green room reviews right now.. XD Should we put the reviews in our logs?
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: Squires' Dormitory
Please let me train beneath the Knights!
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: Title Feedback
Sounds dystopian. I'm a bit of a sucker for them, so I'd definitely pick it up and read the blurb. --- Vulpin Mani
Mar 31, 2015 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
"Fleck paused a second as a hoarse voice called through the wood in which he was playing in." This was pre-first-draft Stoneslide.
Mar 28, 2015 -
Re: Reviews by Chiravian!
I've done 2 requested reviews so far! :D
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: Plenty of Fish... ah, You Know The Rest.
The net's full, but you picked a minnow. Try fishing more. His eyes were blue enough to swim in. (I dread this cliche.)
Mar 25, 2015 -
Re: Controversial opinions about writing
@FaulknerCannes I believe so. To (Paraphrase) Mark Twain, "The difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and lightning bug." This isn't saying, ...
Mar 25, 2015
