Chirantha

Haha, cute and great poem. I suppose you wrote this while feeling like that. It's perfectly connected lines added interest to the poem. And I think this poem is good ...

Did I ever tell you that you were one of the most briliant sad poem writers I had ever seen or heard of. Well, now I do. I mean, see ...

I loved this poem. Your descriptions formed a razor sharp image in my mind. I mean, you had clearly described the feelings, sensations, and even had illustrated the feelings felt ...

Unfortunately, the meteor destroyed every living being on the planet Earth.

I can't believe you said that this needs work. I mean it was awesome. Clearly, you are intending to do this. Just kidding. :wink: Bright colors all around her, greens ...

I thought that some would write some thing like this, and I was write. Well, that was a great poem. You use of strong words gave the poem a great ...

Hi, Esteria. Welcome to YWS. Well, I think I should first say that you should do reviews before posting any other works. As you had already done two, you need ...

Well, your poem was good. Only, I couldn't understand of what you were writing about. Well, it must be your use of serious metaphors and lines. It blasted all her ...

Hey, great poem. I also felt a lump on my throat after reading it. Although, that might be because of my sore throat. :lol: You were like this? Awww, that's ...

Wow, I liked it. As everyone says, it was short, sweet and straight to the point. And the poem being shorter has it's advantages, like not making the reader bored ...

It's more of a 50/50 thing. The person below me is eating a burger or fries.

8/10 No comment.

Banned for catching his drift.

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