Chirantha

No need to get offended 'Pink' but I think I already pointed out everything said in your "overall" But not in the way I wrote it, so it doesn't matter. ...

Faint - Linkin Park Don't stay - Linkin Park Songs just come randomly, but I suppose that's why call this forum randomness. :D

Okay, first let me congratulate you on getting this type of idea. It was very creative and also imaginative. But, the story was very ABRUPT! What I meant by this ...

That one is pure awesome 10/10 Changed from Avatar. I thought people would, you know, laugh at me. :)

Angels & Demons by Dan Brown

Nice one 8/10

I can't believe it. I'm the only boy ever to reply to this. Darn it!!!!! :evil: 8 girls and only one boy??? Oh god!!!!!!!!!

Banned for not having an avatar. :D

I think the character description is good now. Can some review this? Pleeeeease? :(

Firstly, anyone who is saying my character description sucks, give me an example of how to do it in a more better way. Than rating it saying that it just ...

Banned for making me hear you. :D

Thanks for the review. I edited it, and I think it's better now. But, there are some things. Like, when I said "She kept the phone" I meant, she kept ...

Chapter 1 A slow and calm gust of wind rustled the leaves of a lemon tree outside a window. Nimsi Whitewood stood at the open window, gazing out at the ...

Banned for having a very pretty diamond/gem necklace on your avatar. And I'm back. Did anyone miss me?

Sera, or Kitrina. or maybe Carrie.