Chirantha

Its too cute. 10/10

Banned for making you be more adorable with the change of avatar.

Done, Onyx. :D Anyone else?

Hi Onyx, I have to say the same thing you've said. This was much more neater and the stazas were more connected. Mistakes You with the family, smiling, at your ...

Hey there Janine. Welcome to YWS! *Hands cookie* :D I have to ask you a question first. Is this a chapter of a story or is it just a short ...

Interesting prologue Cy. I kinda like the way it seems to be going. Mistakes In the short time that I’ve lived I have never, not even once, given a thought ...

No one? I'm sad again. :smt022

For the first time ever, I saw a mistake-free story. Kudos to you for writing a really big chapter without any serious mistakes. I saw one or two minor ones ...

Hi Fire, Welcome to YWS! Random comment - Do you know how many users that have the word 'fire' in their user names in this site? :D Okay, this is ...

Ahh, good thing you decided to write this in past tense. My, my, my I never thought the second chapter would go this way. Nice idea. Mistakes I ran down ...

Banned for being 16 then. :D

The whole point that captured me in this story was that its written according to a dream you had. When you think about it, most of the ideas that writers ...

Hmm, this is probably the first time I'm reviewing a present tense story. :D I think I'll give a shot at it. Mistakes Knock, knock, knock. I shake my head, ...

Badges system I have to ask you Nate. Won't the badge system be more of bad thing than a good thing. I mean, people will look up to people with ...

Banned for almost swearing. :D