Chirantha

Hi Stela, Well, I'm intrigued. This story seems mysterious enough to catch my attention and I do hope you intend to continue it. Okay, let's dive into the review, Mistakes ...

9/10 So true :D

Hi there Max, So, before I review this, wow, that's was a long story, and I did like the story although there are some points where I got confused, mostly ...

First of all, Welcome to YWS *Hands a butter cookie* :) Well, Spyrit, this is really good effort you've put into this story. It has a certain added-touch into it, ...

Hi there Hayley. Okay, I read the story, and I have to say, you took a really unusual route. I meant, how you put more focus into dialogue than description, ...

Before beginning my review, Welcome to YWS :D *Hands a milk cookie* Anyway, nice story. But before I go into specifics I should repeat the fact mentioned by 'Parigirle' The ...

Ah...I don't think got it's meaning, but.......9/10 :wink:

Nice :D 10/10

8/10 :)

Banned for having done only one review then :)

Banned for not being a tomboy yourself (I'm not so sure about this) :D

*Okay, to everyone, Kit is not more powerful than any other character, because that's god-modding or something. Let's just say, she is more powerful than she was before.* *I like ...

Okay, Silverson, sorry for sending you a 'unkind' pm, but I was just annoyed at that time. Not at you, okay? I was angry at a cousin who just lied ...

*Okay, Silverson, sorry for sending you a 'unkind' pm, but I was just annoyed at that time. Not at you, okay? I was angry at a cousin who just lied ...

Nice one Ranger. :D 10/10