Chirantha

Even if I'm a boy it doesn't mean I don't use female characters in my stories! So,your tips are really beneficial and helpful. Thankyou very much :D

I can't how you came up with all of those ideas but they certainly work,especially the last one. Thankyou. :D Though,I am not into the one about talking to strangers.

WOW! You really pointed out some essential points I miss when I write,especially about the five senses Thankyou so much :D

your brilliant imagination will lead you to a great future :wink: Great start,your view about shape shifters is great,and your view about battles.perfect. But you had not added some of ...

I have to agree with VicternoO that it's an incredible story for a 60 years old lady. Is your character a fairy?a pixie?an angel? By your description about her I ...

I can say that you are talented in writing.Good work. :D But more over,you should have described little more of the environment and about Macy. Your mysterious character seems to ...

Your view about the "hell" is interesting.But there are some spelling mistakes that had been pointed out by others,so I won't repeat them. It's pretty short so that I can't ...

Your story is quite good but i'll have say that you should have described more about Arabelle in the ball and she falling in love with the prince.Her mother is ...