Chirantha

A first person story of a guinea pig. Interesting. 1. mistakes, My owner had been to “busy” to feed me. Put it like this, "My owner, Diane had been too ...

Acually, Firestalker invited me, right after I got internet, or I would have found this earlier.

Hello Andie, Welcome to YWS. So, you have been writting since first grade? Now that's an acomplishment. I only started writing from the fifth grade. Now, get to know the ...

This story was well written but it had a tiny lack of description. Okay, see these, "Shut up!" The dragon swung his heavy tail towards his prisoner, barely missing her ...

Actually, I started writing when I was ten years old.But writing wasn't my thing when I was small.I used to draw.That started from age two.Anyway, my first book was "Super ...

Can anyone tell me that if someone is co-authoring a story, won't it be like copying an idea.I mean one person write a chapter and post it while the second ...

Well, I had posted a story in fantasy fiction and it concerns an alien does not have anything futuristic in it. But are aliens a fantasy? or Scientific things?

Let me see, here's what I think.Firstly the knight should have a name.Secondly this story should be in Historical fiction from what I read. Okay, onto mistakes, The Dragon’s Revenge ...

Mystic May reminds me of Prof.Trelawney. Okay, turning it to a comedy would be better.And that will be funny. A chosen one of the elite will come to rid the ...

You had written the story so well, that you can actually hear Jack and Norrington saying the dialogue. You really are the pride of the King’s Navy, aren’t you, son? ...

This poem is one of the best poems I had read.And it had a great and mysterious meaning inside every verse, just how a poem should be. I really like ...

Hey there,welcome to YWS. You'll soon see that this is a really great cool first you'll think that everyone here know everyone else but don't worry you'll find some friends. ...

Hey,thanks for reviewing the story. You know, when I said was elevan,I didn't mean it was Alex.The alien girl was elevan.see, He lifted out a girl,who looked no more older ...

The story was really short and very little decribed. But it was nevertheless,humorous.see, I died! Oh no! You made it sound like as if you dropped dead everyday. I wish ...

Wow,great story. But you should perhaps keep spaces a little more often.see, I hesitated, the pen hovering over the interactive whiteboard. Which equation was it? What was the point of ...