Chirantha

Banned for making us write six posts about the spider.

... Oh, I thought after I already asked here, I could post it here. :( I can edit the above and PM you a whole different profile. Okay, here's my ...

Hi there Stela, Well, I like the way you used this chapter to emphasize the relationship between the main character and her parents. Also, you showed the main character's own ...

Hi there Polink, Well, I'm here to review the 2nd chapter. Hopefully, I'll be able to review it before I have to sleep. Alright, this was a great chapter and ...

Hi there Stargirl, *throws confetti* Welcome to YWS :D May I start by saying that I find your real life name cute? Oops, I just did that without asking. :D ...

Hey Searria, I'm glad you joined. :D

Hey there Mystic, *Hands a chocolate* Welcome to YWS. The place to improve your writing and get inspired by the works of other people. It's a community of extremely helpful ...

Banned for upsetting the spider.

Oh come on... No one yet? :(

Banned because there's an actual user here called "priceless" :D

Hi there Stela! I'm interested in the plot of the story. It seems scary and mysterious. I like it. :D Alright, let me just jump into the review. Mistakes I ...

Hi there, I was sad to see that this chapter was so small. You could've have made it bigger and more descriptive. Mistakes It was misty and dark in my ...

Hey, no problem. I'm glad I had helped. By the way, I didn't read your comment until I started reviewing the 7th chapter, so If had repeated things about character ...

C walks in to the pandemonium and orders a sherry coke. Nate merely points at Snoink, who was hiccuping and giggling on the floor near Priceless surrounded by empty sherry ...

I can apply for a doctor or a security guard if you want :)