Chirantha

Banned being lovesick.

Am I really too late to join? If not, here's my character. Name - Layla Bluefields Age - 14 Appearence -

ooooh, tempted little girl is she? Okay, it was too small to make out what it is like. I can say that your character is a girl who is craving ...

Banned for having banned someone for loving Mulan. And for being totally obsessed in Sweeney Todd and Tim Burton.

Hi, Megan. Happy to meet you. :D I'm Chirantha, and thats my real name. Be sure to check my profile, because I am a boy. Yup, its really hard to ...

This story has horror, romance and fantasy. I like it. But I was slightly digusted by the vomiting scene, but it was unique. I mean, no one writtes about it. ...

WOW, just wow. What else can I say? I mean not a single mistake, Thrilling description and magnificient feelings. Wow. You really are nearing J.K. Rowlings. You wrote this in ...

I think the cliffhanger was an awesome idea to this story. Greatly written. Okay, the mistakes I spotted, “Riley stop worrying,” exclaimed Sam. An abrupt start of the story, you ...

This reminded me of The sims 2 Castaway. Good work. This was pretty short, considering its beggining, but greatly written. What are they going to find on the island? People? ...

Oh, poor, poor Amelia. How sad. :cry: Good descriptions, as I say I everytime. "Who am I? I'm me! I'm Amelia, Mum!" Change it to "Who am I? I'm Amelia! ...

Oh, how sad. You are right, it takes a sad twist. Well, I suppose you are getting better. No mistakes as far as I can see. This time you only ...

Hello again, Castlesinthesky. Good description. And good second chapter. Okay, onto mistakes, she was the only person in my family that I’d seemed to inherit genes from. Change it to ...

Fantastic story, well done. :D And, yep, as everyone says the rain made it more romantic and basically realistic. Please, please, please write about Harry and Ginny. So, I've no ...

Welcome to YWS. Good story, great in fact. Well done. But as BBB says it needs suspense. A plane falling out of the sky into the ocean isn't something that ...

Great story, I can say you had written it really well. Do you do martial arts? You really had described every single movement. Good work. There are no pads, there ...