Chirantha

First, I should say that you should rate this "R" or "PG13" because of the use of drugs and vulgar languages. Okay, I can say it was good but it ...

A really great story. It's so realistic. And Joe, by putting that much "m"s in your review you are just cheating to make that a review. :x About the story, ...

Ummmmm, I don't know what to say about this. For one thing, I didn't understand the story. See this, Imagine, if you will, a monkey. A monkey who sits in ...

Very interesting. As if the storyteller or the announcer is talking to an audience. Yeah, I've to agree with the others, because for the word 'events' it will be more ...

Oooh, good story. For minute while reading your story, I really felt like being in the castle with the othes. Nit-picks, Their lives would never be the same again... Actually ...

Completely wrong. I don't have crushes on anyone and is determined not to. The person below me have to go to the bathroom badly. :wink:

Banned for having a flying horse as your avatar.

Hi to every new member. I'm Chirantha. Welcome to YWS. Kaonna is a great and beautiful name. Okay, it might seem hard to navigate around this site but you'll soon ...

Okay, your story was good but weird and unusual. And you had rushed through it. I mean you had introduced character too fast. And you haven't described any single one. ...

**Okay, no one is going to introduce me if sit here and wait. My character is the french class.** Anne sat on the first row of seats, twirling her pen ...

I a character in this book or not? XD but :cry:

Hmm, thoughtful plot. But I thought that the rivalry between Slythering and Griffindor. But this is more better. And the Hufflepuff's sign is an eagle. This was really well written, ...

Oooh, getting scary, isn't it? Okay, I may have sounded harsh in the last review but I'm sorry for that. Okay, firstly you should divide the paragraphs and dialogues. Keeping ...

I suppose it will be really hard. What with school, homework and the year end test. But I'll try to do my best.

**Hey, where am I in this?** **And you all have to remember that people from the other side of the world are in this. Like Firestalker and me. So, at ...