Chirantha

Welcome to the coolest writing site ever. The YWS. Or mainly known as The Young Writers Society. I'm Chirantha. And Brianna is great name. :D So, I don't need to ...

Ooooh, I loved it. How it almost told us a story. Well done. :D She always was like a God to me ( A period here ) Running her own ...

It was a sad little poem and I liked it. It was good. :) It has been a long year. Now its time to go, ( Maybe, put 'But, now ...

I really didn't understand what this poem was about but it was well written. Well done. There was a moment, yesterday.( It would be better if you cut the comma ...

This story confused me. Was your character in Japan or France? Who was Grandma Juliet? Kate's own grandmother or a neighbour? Where were Kate's parents? What were you talking about ...

I practically lived in the story. This was written so well, that I can't even make out a mistake. You really are improving. The two big cats bounded forward and ...

I don't know what to say. It was great. Awesome in fact. I cower in the corner, unobserved. Just a figment of your imagination, Until you bring me to life. ...

I don't know why but it didn't seem right. Maybe because it was short but I kinda didn't like it. I know, you haven't dwelled too long on metaphors and ...

Well, I liked it. It was great. Listen and listen good, for i will not retell. There should be comma after the first 'listen' and capitalize the 'I' They say ...

I can see that you had used great words to express the feeling. Good work. I was born into this dark world, a blooming flower in the sun. But the ...

Mostly, I like adventure and fantasy movies, like "The Golden Compass" and like the "The Pirates of the Carribean" But I also like comedy, like "Mind Your Language' and "Johnny ...

I like it. It shows out it's meaning by such a few sentences. Good work. It's time for me to crash, boom, fall. Into your open arms, that don't seem ...

Hey, Firestalker, what about my question? Okay, first I have to say that to put a name for your charater. I didn't even know if that character was a boy ...

I not a person who knows much about poetry, but your poem wasn't the type I expected from you, no offence but I'm disappointed. :( Well, the repetition made it ...

Let me see. Good poem. Katrina(,) you have (had) done your duty, satan (Satan) has erected your call. Now(,) in the fiery depths of hell(,) the crowd is expanding. Gustav ...