ChiquitaPeroPicosa

I like the idea and emotion behind your work, but you use and then drop the rhyme scheme as it suits you which disrupts the flow of the poem because ...

I thought it was really, really sweet. I agree that the beginning several lines with the same word over and over made it a) kind of monotonous and b) more ...

I edited a few things. Would still love more feedback! :) I watched horrified. Logan, my sweet Logan, my best friend, held a shot gun level with his father’s face. ...

A Monarch Butterfly I happened to catch resting on a flower on its way to MEXICO for winter. Viva la Mexico!

Yet another photo from my collection from the lily gardens.

Pat yourself on the back, because this is awesome for your first attempt at a tiger. I must say your drawing reminds me almost of early Asian representations of a ...

San Angelo, Texas has on of the most exquisite International Lily Gardens in the world. Its actually right across the street from the bigger high school in town. And thank ...

I really liked it. I agree with the whole unnecessary commas thing, unless you intended to make it that stilted, but I wouldn't think so. I also agree that this ...

I'm of little to know help on critiquing poetry, having never written any or read much, but I will say while I normally find poetry to be confusing and overly ...

Ok, so this is an flash forward of something I've been working on. This is where I want to end up but I'm kind of stuck on how to get ...

I really liked the style and attention to detail, but I'm not really seeing how this is a romance. It sort of goes from "get my suitcase, asshole," to her ...

I live near an international lily garden, and I am constantly amazed by the beauty of these flowers.