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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Girl I Hate

    I thank you both for taking the time to review my little post. To Kafkaescence, I thank you for you constructive criticisms. :) I will definitely take each of your ...

    Jan 31, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Girl I Hate

    I hate her. I hate the girl staring at me. Her eyes are ugly, brown, and small. Her moles that dot her face look like marks where I’d love to ...

    Jan 24, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Top Ten Reasons Why Women Are Better Than Men!

    It would be one thing if your piece was more satirical, but in all honesty it "sounded" like you meant what you were saying about men. I don't know you, ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Seven Reasons Why Men are Better than Women

    When I clicked on the post "Seven Reasons Why Men are Better than Women" I knew I was in for some laughs, but this was far better than what I ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The Lies Disney Told Me

    I think you are very entitled to your own opinion and for the most part I understand and even agree with most of what you said. Its true, it would ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • General Articles Re: The Lies Disney Told Me

    Disney never prepared me for this. You’d think that in my extensive collection of Disney VHS tapes one of them would have prepared me for this moment. Disney told me ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Remembering...

    I really liked the imagery you created. It was simple but pretty easy to follow. It left it open enough that just about anyone could relate to it, which as ...

    Dec 27, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I Could Wish

    I do not profess to be a poet. This is only my second attempt at poetry ever, so please be kind. Though I would love any constructive criticism. I could ...

    Dec 27, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Always

    Here is my first attempt ever at writing poetry and I am ashamed that it has come out this dismal. I would appreciate though anyone telling me which is LESS ...

    Dec 21, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: On the Hunt

    I know its kinda dorky, but this is my kitty. Hehe. :)

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Logan's Last Words (edited)

    Thank you so much for all of your critiques! :) Just to clarify for anyone else who was confused by the speaker's name: Harley is a girl. I know some ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Even In Death I Still Love You

    I notice that everyone has commented on the grainy effect. The original shot was much more focused. I added in the grainy effect with Photoshop. Hehe. Guess I won't do ...

    Jun 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Even In Death I Still Love You

    I accidentally happened upon this tombstone while lost in Arlington National Cemetery. I couldn't help but take a picture. This is my first time playing with Photoshop so let me ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Unstrung

    I really like your drawing. I agree that his hair is a little sloppy and the loopy line off to the side is a little distracting, but I love the ...

    Jun 5, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Fate Worse Than Death

    I don't know if it was intentional or not but the way you typed out your stanza didn't always seemed to make sense. Like it would break in the middle ...

    Jun 5, 2010


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