ChimpanzeeMinkey

So I just wrote this yesterday, I'm not all that great at poetry but I hope it's enjoyable. Any pointers/advice would be awesome! Thanks :) Before the dawn turns into ...

I also held off on reading this because I was under the impression it was some crazy 'I love math' poem. Which i have no problem with it just wouldn't ...

This was brilliant! I'm going to join the general opinion here and say I loooved it! For how short this is you gave death a surprisingly graspable character and it ...

I thought this was absolutely beautiful. It has a very poetic feeling to it and it captures the fathers inner struggle very well. I'm sure I just sound like a ...

The only thing that really stood out to me as needing a change was this line: Alarm clocks are screams, The wording is a bit off. Maybe something more like ...