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Re: Losing control: prolgue(revamped)
If you made a mistake then I can understand the part that says 'cliff ,Its" shouldn't it be a period. Don't you mean 'No lives were lost' instead of 'None ...
Apr 15, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 1
This story is wonderful. It shows that her mother cares, but it looks like a little too much. Some people in life may actually feel this way and the feeling ...
Apr 12, 2013 -
Re: Beyond the Great Beyond Part One: The Guardian
Oh my, it has me on the edge of my seat. This is unlike any I have read. Almost every book has a story. A long story that lastes a ...
Apr 12, 2013