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Re: Hell Remains
Wow, words cannot express how much I loved this! You took an idea that's a given but that most people won't really talk about, and you completely brought it out! ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Because I'm Gangsta!
I have to admit that the first thought that came to mind when I saw the title was "You have GOT to be kidding me." I was expecting something really ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Alone
Yay, my turn! Well, first of all, I'm all for romance. Love it. Second of all, this was all just a tad too confusing because it took most of the ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: lies
The idea was good, but maybe add a little more to it? It was a little hard to follow with all the line changes and everything, but overall, I look ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: My Desert Rose
Well, anything I have to say has pretty much been said! Although, you might want to explain why you call her that. It's just kind of random. This just kind ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: When Last I Saw the Fisher
Wow, so I really do like this one! It was one of those "Grah! Tell me more!" moments. I like the air of both mythology and reality all intertwined. The ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: My Ghost
Before you read, I'd like to give a note that this was written a few years ago, and is a tad cliche. If you've got any advice on how to ...
May 14, 2008 -
Re: Standing Still
Mind if I take a crack at it? Thank you! I really think this could have been a spectacular piece if it didn't sound like you didn't mean for it ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Race
I liked it in the sense that it made me think back to the butterfly and roller coaster feelings of Jr. High. To quote Demeter, "It made me smile." However, ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: That Night
Well, the good news is, I really liked some of these phrases. You really had something going. The bad new is, it was really hard to read with all the ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Purple
Considering Purple is my favorite color, I had to take a look at this. I agree with others here: a lot of this just seems like ongoing angst. Not that ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Snow
I really love how you put some of these words together! I can't say I understand the hidden meaning, but it was fun to read. Anything I found has already ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: The long road home
Mind if I take a crack at it? I liked a lot of the phrases, but quite honestly, I got bored very quickly. Maybe less pondering? It sounds like all ...
May 13, 2008 -
Re: Life, Friends, Books, Love, and Awesome Coffee
Name: Callie Dunn Apperance: 5'5", green/gold eyes, shoulder length dark brown hair, average body type *not skinny, not fat*, pale complection Occupation: Magazine Photographer Age: 26 Loves: old phot
May 12, 2008 -
Re: Memories Before
I really do like the contrasting images, but I have to agree about the emotion part. I just really couldn't FEEL this one. All in all, great job! ~ Eden
May 12, 2008
