ChildofEden

I had a thought running through my head after watching a LOTR movie, and it stuck. I wondered what would run through a woman's head as she watched her lover, ...

Is that better, kids?

Someone once suggested putting this into song format, so here goes! ~ Eden ---------------------------------------------------------- (Verse 1) Once so young and starry-eyed, you made me trip; took me

Thank you to you all, your critiques are much appreciated! ~ Eden

Hola! I decided to fulfill Leja's wish and be another person to comment on this piece! I too found this poem to be just a tad too confusing. I can ...

Hola! & a late welcome to YSW to you! Mind if I give this a go? Speaking as a person who almost ALWAYS writes in rhyme, I'm proud of you ...

I agree with a lot of what has been said here! The pictures are very beautiful, but it kind of takes away from them when they're blurry & huge. & ...

Hiya! The title in itself caught my eye, & I thought I'd lend a hand....or keyboard as the case may be. Ok? Ok. After reading the poem, there's a few ...

Not completely done with this piece, but wanted some feedback to see if I'm on the right track. ~ Eden ----------------------------------------- O masked face of mystery; fire and ice inside. ...

Veronica "Ronnie" Tyson Character for a medieval-ish story I'm working on. 17 year old girl, Tomboy & unaware that she's pretty. Hates the restrictions on women in her time, and ...

Baha Sorry, Butterfly, but Little Hippo is purple, just like my muse.

This story is the brainchild of a life long love. I'm an avid collector of hippos, so I suppose it would make sense that I would write a story about ...

This story is the brainchild of a life long love. I'm an avid collector of hippos, so I suppose it would make sense that I would write a story about ...