ChibiGiraffe

Hey. Chibi's here! :D It took me a couple times reading this poem in order to understand it. I kept thinking that when you mentioned the girl who never was, ...

I looked away from the grimy window as I heard the door open. Grace walked through it, her eyes downcast and filled with tears. “Graciebug,” I said softly and slid ...

Hey there. Chibi here. Let's start with a few nitpicks: all it does is complaining complaining complaining ^ should be complain. Stanza 6 confused me a little, what do starving ...

Awww, this is so sad! :( It made me want to cry! He's not dead, right? Is he still alive? PLEASE TELL ME HE'S STILL ALIVE!!! Ahem, sorry. Anyway, I ...

Chapter One Where am I? I sat up and took a look at my surroundings. All I could see was gray. I put a hand up to my head and ...

Hey there. :) First off, I really liked this story.I really thought you touched on something deep with the twist at the end. It was awesome and gave me chills. ...

Wrote this because I had inspiration. Heck yes. I hate you. I hate how you tease me. How you say “Just kidding!” When I thought you meant it. I hate ...

Alrighty, first review! :D yay! I'll start off by reviewing some grammar issues. Survival is the struggle. Trust , is the will of life. I don't think there should be ...

This was amazing. I couldn't stop reading.

Lol, first off, loved the evil bunnies. One thing that should probably be clarified, is your main character schizophrenic or are the bunnies actually there and it's just that nobody ...

I can’t think I can’t focus on anything. Nothing is flowing like it should be. I feel like a rushing river that’s been stopped up by a dam. Will it ...

I look over the edge of the cliff searching for a reason to live. Something inside of me is curious what death feels like. How would it feel if I ...

YAY I likey this pic :3 It's awesome!

Yay! First review! I thought this story was pretty awesome. You described everything very nicely and most of the dialogue was pretty good. I love some of the comparisons you ...

Hey there! :D I really like your story so far, I think it's really original and awesome. I like this chapter, I personally like dialogue and Liyam turning into a ...