ChibiGiraffe

The clouds fall from the sky In pieces, soft, white covering the ground In a chilly blanket, not Too deep, and not Too shallow, Just perfect.

Ceiling’s cracked I stare at it, comparing it to the fissure in my heart. I should be mad at you. But I’m not, I can’t, I’m just missing That little ...

If this is a picture, I would be happy to live in it, Content to lie in your arms Forever, watching the sun Fall on your cheeks Illuminating your face. ...

Awww!

Hey, ChibiGiraffe here. I haven't reviewed novel stuff in awhile, so please bear with me. :P I'm going to review all the unfun grammar issues with this story first. I ...

Hey. I'm really not a big fan of Romeo and Juliet (don't really like insta-love) but pushing that aside, I thought this was good. I like the way you describe ...

Hey there! I haven't reviewed anything in awhile, so forgive me, I'm a little rusty. My God. The first part of this poem is pretty much how I'm feeling right ...

I’ve come to get you. Come on, I know you can’t resist me. I’ve got one hand on your heart And the other on your soul. You are mine. There’s ...

I’ve seen your face In an old picture, And maybe in a dream or two. We were out watching Fireflies in my backyard. I don’t remember everything you said, But ...

Hi there and welcome to YWS! You're totally going to love it here. ;) I love getting reviews, it's my favorite part of this site! So if you don't mind, ...

Oh God. Wow. Loved this. Great poem, great message. As hard as I tried, I just can't find any nitpicks for this. :) Amazing job *likes*

Wow. This was great! You really put your point across and used good imagery to boot. :) Nitpicks: Her hair looked like warm chocolate and Her caramel-coloured skin was flawless. ...

Hahaha, this was so epic. :) My only nitpick is that the last line sounds a little out of place. I think that if you cut out the last line ...

Another random burst of inspiration... I’m like a hurricane. Raging through the valleys, Wreaking havoc and destruction On anything that crosses my path. I’m like a bolt of lightning. Anger ...

Wrote this on a random burst of inspiration. It's unedited. No crushing please :smt003 Where are you? I'm looking, but I can't see you. You promised you’d always Be there ...