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It was...intruiging. I rather liked some parts...like this one Am I the only crazy one, live in a world of pain? Or am the one who's right, and everyone else ...

8/10 ....because is peeeeeeeerdy.

10/10!!! I love it heheheeee. It's one of those soothing mantra thingies, like, where you're the lake and all that...rofl, I love it!

Grar! Wonderful tale by the way but argh! The typos, the continual dimness, the constant tension! Grrr. Alright, going from the top shall we? This will take a while I ...

When the Clock Struck. When the clock struck half-past midnight, The faintest glow of blood-red grew Out from under the street light. It throbbed and pulsed with a sinister life ...

Very nice! It's almost exactly what I consider Frankensteins creation to be thinking, when he was building the lady. ...except for the creepyness I think. I mean, from what I ...

I’ve never felt as warm As I do now Cliche yes, but add -- onto the end of it. so it would read I've never felt as warm -- As ...

Yeeeeeeaaaah....the format. I was like, read read zip ping new line. Read read zip ping new line. read read zip ping new line.....you get the idea. All the line breaks ...

Hmm...Godame it Bubbles! you stole all the points! *sulks* But aye, punctuation, spelling and popping one half into a new verse would make it a bit easier to read, I ...

I spent about five minutes trying to figure out what the blazes your avatar was doing...and then I was looking around the page, wondering if I -was- in the poetry ...

Well...I'll welcome you too, since everyone else is XD and I liked your poem. I don't usually like free verse, they tend to lose sence about halfway through and degenerate ...

^ 7/10 I like the english part...what language is the other bit please?

Hmm....Nice. My first fanfic reading and well...I'm a little lost as to whats actually happening. *checks back* yay, I'm a private XD ...somewhere. Keep it up, and post! I want ...

Grar! You stopped! Right in an important part too! Grr! Evidently, I'm hooked. It's good, for the bare bones of a story. You've written the basic plot up to a ...

The artist scuplts her a set of cherub lips, two handfuls of breasts and twists her locks with gritted stone. He sets her in a garden; a fountain splashing ghosts ...