ChernobyllyInclined

Really quite excellent. Honestly, I think you've kept a much superior consistency and pace in this story than any other. The characters are engaging, Lavender is only frustrating to sex/romance ...

In three more seconds you'll be a better writer than I. As usual, all technical aspects are in working order. Well oiled. Ignition lights are on. Stop hitting people with ...

'Can't believe it took me a cough and a half to review this. Ah, that guy is one funny little bugger. I definitely liked his description, and his dialogue was ...

Well, well, well, it's the -- darnit, Robin Hood isn't in my head the way it used to be. James. Come back to me. Anyway, BABE, this was great. You ...

Perhaps more odd than I had at first imagined that mine will be the only review for this gripping chapter. Perhaps it is my mood, but probably not. Anyhow, I ...

Well, well, Bonzai, now what do we have here? I don't know, Shenzi. Ed? *insane laughing* Just what I was thinking. A trio of trespassers! ___ I don't think that's ...

This was good. I liked the simplicity of the writing; it got the point across well. As far as characters go, I believe it was necessary to at least hint ...

Okay, first of all, I can't help loving the way words make friends, and go on beach trips, and take tap dancing lessons in your stories. I'm used to it, ...

Well, my last review was sort of an encompassment. But I promised another, so don't expect anymore Three Stooges quotes. I liked how you developed Triedtha more. It was good. ...

Well, as far as compliments go, I shall vow to give realtruegoodtruereal ones. For instance, I must say you have much improved on pace. I was just remembering how absolutely ...

Odd that your last piece of writing found itself brutalized; this was actually very well done. Either you really, really, really improved, or your last reviewers were just insecure little ...

Hahahahaha. Honestly. This was just choc-full of silliness, and I salute you for it. And, by the way, you need to write some more weird stuff about sprites and such. ...

So I read a book called “Elementary Coral”; and it’s about a boy who steals the fortune of a rich, snobby, irritating brat of a private school… girl. He kills ...

Egad! what is mesa saying? That just came to me. Sorry. Please accept my most sincere apologies. I beg you. FUNNY AS A FOX. This really did capture a few ...

This surprised me. It was actually different from the others. Congratulations. “Thank you.” I told him in awe of being so close to him. He was so quite it felt ...