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Re: Ejected
When all gold had turned to dust, needless filth floated atop the sky like something commonplace. It didn’t know it was low and dirty because they had put it in ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: All the Shades of Grey - Prologue
But the media is CATERING to the darker side of human nature. Just because people like something doesn't mean you should give it them. People like pot, but no one ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: All the Shades of Grey - Prologue
I will admit, I am annoyed. Do we not have enough stories that focus on dark, ugly, blackness full of filth? Can we not imagine something better than what we ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Stronger
The idea is good and I think you have handle on it, but it needs more imagery. Instead of just saying 'you cursed me' or 'you beat me', describe it. ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: deleted
Hey! I saw your shout on my blog. Unfortunately, I agree with you. I am incredibly awesome...haha Anyway, I liked this. The writing was good and it flowed rather well...onto ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Animal Rights
I actually meant the MAINSTREAM media. Which, of course, is all liberal. I think I said before, I'm neither liberal nor conservative but I read both of their news to ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Sourblood
Well, very exciting, to say the least. Although I can't help admitting, however unnecessary it might be, that I'm slightly tired of people/things with NO conscious whatsoever. Not even a ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Animal Rights
Yeah, I'm sorry for insulting you. It wasn't necessary. Your response was much more articulate than your actual essay--if that's what you would call it. It made alot more sense ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: At what age did you start writing and
Ah, the good old days. I started writing before I could read. I loved the way letters looked strung together so I would write nonsense but put the letters together ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Animal Rights
Well, before anything else, I would like to say I am glad you have something you really care about and that you would be willing to fight for. I honestly ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Sourblood
"I'm alooot like you, so please, I'm yours, I'm waaaiiting. I think I'd be gooooood for you and youuuu'd be goooood for me." That's what I thought. Anyway, another terrible ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Ever Happily
like anyone can even know that
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Bastards
CHAPTER TWO - For anyone who cares. ______ A crackle like static plastic emitted subtly from the widening door. It didn’t rise or fall but it’s persistence seemed to shut ...
Jun 11, 2008 -
Re: Death Defining
Oh my god. That was frightening. The writing was fairly good but the talent almost seemed wasted on something so hopelessly dark. Although there is, technically, nothing wrong with this ...
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: *Flagged for deletion*
Well, I liked it. I must say that you have done a better job of differentiating bad guys in this one. I see neither a Rick nor a Kayo anywhere ...
Jun 8, 2008
