ChernobyllyInclined

Third of the rings

And today, a magic trick.

Hey everyone, thanks for the reviews. AngelofDeath: Thank you for your feedback but I think you missed the point a little. If you read what Aaron had to say then ...

If you like brandy and empty laundry baskets. Not yet, unfortunately. __________ I turned around. “Wait, let me guess, you always wanted to meet a vampire?” My mind was disordered ...

This was slightly disconcerting. CHARACTERS: I'm going to guess that you're writing about yourself by the way you talk like the reader already knows the characters pretty well. But I ...

Thanks LittleB! I do have more but I'm not sure if I'll post it just for...everyone else's sake. And you're right, I need to stir up the plot more.

I wrote this when I was about fourteen. Now I'm eleven. _______ Yes, Ada was crying again. Her best friend had played a painful joke on her, and now her ...

Well, I admire your candor. Let's try that again, shall we? Wow. I am laughing surprisingly hard at how well that fits in with the story. CHARACTERS: I was definitely ...

Why thank you, Sela! How very kind of you. You smell like roses from afar. But, up close, you smell like tuna. (That part was from Mae.) Anyway, I need ...

Actually, the bathtub comment wasn't meant in a negative way...perhaps it was unconscious.

Prok needs God help. His mind has admitted itself. I have those ideas but I don't make them into stories. I would feel like I was being useless and shallow. ...

I don't have time for a review, but I wanted to let you know I think your humor was clever and--perhaps--a little misunderstood. I thought the idea and the story ...

This was...interesting. I must say it is not only a cliche. CHARACTERS: I was actually impressed with the differentiation of the characters because, often, in a story like this, the ...

Thanks Bro. Perhaps a little more of a review next time?

Thanks, Clograbby! I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the feedback. I edited a little and, if I do post more, I'll be sure to let you know. Why ...