ChernobyllyInclined

Unfortunately, I don't have time for a long review. But I don't often find stories on here with some of the oddities that this one expressed. The girl was interesting ...

Wow. I've only got a solid 8,198 words. But I only started three days ago. Normally, I can write a thousand words in under fifty minutes so hopefully I'll catch ...

Because.

I've decided I don't like using the same thread for more chapters. So if this gets another chapter, it will be in it's own little thread. Don't you worry.

Personally, I am not partial to vampire stories. But I will be fair and give you my best review. CHARACTERS: The characters really have almost nothing that sets them apart ...

Thanks for reviews. Prok, I don't know. I just don't. Sela, yeah. Yeah, okay.

So, I hate romance. And I hate it when people end the first chapter with two strangers making out. And not prostitute strangers, presumably. But I wanted to see if ...

Thai! I am detrimentally disappointed that this has been on here for over a day and I am the first reviewer. You know how I told you that people only ...

I agree with Gilmore that this is well-done, in a way. You have a way with language and I think you did quite a nice job in every technical sense. ...

Very good, Sela. Mostly because it was posted on Frodo's birthday--good luck and all that. No, not really. Well written, really. Everything fit together nicely and previous reviewer caught the ...

Indeed, this is probably your best. Like I said, people don't like reviewing stuff they can't easily criticize. I was impressed at how even the pace was and how you ...

I am officially affronted. There should not be someone who considers himself/herself a writer who does not at least understand Dickens. Great Expectations was slower than some of his other ...

The bad thing about writing a story and telling people that it's about your life is that when they review it and tell you it isn't that good, it might ...

Sela, Sela, Sela. You need to make this more realistic. In regards to Carly and Aaron: If she really doesn't want to go with him, then she's in a public ...

Thanks Sela and LittleB. Chapter four will be up soon...